“It was a beautiful night that night. The stars were…oh, but you don’t want to hear about the stars, do you? Well, I’m not sure that you really want to hear about the fire either, and I think you could use to hear about the stars. So I’ll start again.”
“It was a beautiful night that night. The stars shone with a gentle radiance as they followed their eternal paths through the sky. Summer was winding down and there was an ever so slight chill, the ghost of autumn future, in the air. The leaves trembled in a light breeze, and my soul trembled with them.
Mortimer, though – Mortimer was annoyed.”
‘Guys, let’s go home. It’s almost curfew and Mom will kill me if the police bring me home again. You know she said that the next time it happened she’d make me eat asparagus until I threw up.’
‘Aw, come on Morty. Live a little. Or is the ickle baby afraid of a little bit of asparagus?’
‘Besides, haven’t you ever dreamed of flying? Man, one more year of that stupid school and then I’m coming here. Maybe I’ll even give you kids a ride when I get my own plane. Be the thrill of your little lives, huh?’
“I had tuned them out, preferring the conversation of the stars and the trees and the wind to their bickering. But then the wind brought a new message, a dark tale of fire and panic and the death of innocence.”
‘Hey guys, do you smell that? It smells like smoke.’
‘Yeah, it does. Probably someone cooking out.’
‘No, Bella. We’re going home and not getting picked up by the police and not having asparagus forced down our throats and not puking until we die. Come on, let’s go.’
‘I’m going to go check it out.’
‘Hey, wait up! If I’m going to be puking up asparagus all day tomorrow I want it to be worth it!’
“We followed the scent of the smoke up the hill and to the waterfall. I can still feel the smoke burning my nose and taste its acrid foulness in my mouth. As for what we saw when we arrived at the waterfall, I am sure you can imagine it.”
Imagine it. You can imagine it. The fire. Burning, burning. The fire comes for us all. The light of the fire is the shadow of death.
“Are you going to be all right? I know this is a tough subject for you, but it is what you came to hear.”
Lilith gulped and nodded. She had to stay in control. She had to stay focused. Even if she could feel the flames licking at her skin.
“Mortimer was the first one to make it to the door of the house.”
‘Umm, guys? There’s people in there.’
‘Oh man. What do we do?’
‘I don’t know. You’re the oldest.’
‘What are you guys waiting for? We’ve got to save them!’
“But when I got to the door, all my bravado disappeared and I froze.”
“I saw Emma. And she saw me.”
and Emma doesn’t look like she’s happy to see Bella either…you’d think she’d be saying yay now we’re saved but now I’m thinkin she’s a bit demented, or maybe she blames bella because bella convinced her to play at her house and now this is the bad thing that would happen. impressive post! love the story š
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:O Why does Emma look peeved off? I hope that she isn’t actually evil or demented as Samantha put it.
Eeeek!
Twas a good update. ^_^
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Well, she can’t be totally mentally healthy with Seth for a father, can she? š
Thank you. š
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Wow.
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Ha! Very minimalist. I like that. I’m grateful that you came to read my little story, and I hope that was a good wow. š
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Aaaaaah! Aaaaah! I didn’t realize the update was already up! I did manage to send you a PM at boolprop prior to reading this, but now that I have read it, I am much too overexcited to continue trying to not sound like an idiot. I will catch you later. Great work, as always!
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OK, well, I’ve already peed in my pants, so it’s all good. I hope you feel better soon. I can hold my excitement in abeyance if you are ill. e-Hugs coming your way.
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I’ve read the scroll over text but a few of the pictures won’t let me read it so I’m needing to ask what it is I need to check out because its totally awesome. My curiosity has peaked…also I didn’t learn the cats new nickname
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That’s weird. I don’t know what happened, but I went through and fixed all the mouseover text. I think. My husband’s new nickname is “Bella of the cats” and what you need to check is Lilith’s favorite song. Lillian, Egypt, by Josh Ritter.
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Woah. Woah. Wait. So they knew there were witnesses? Wow. And I have a theory about the mystery of Lillith, but I’m not sharing it cuz when I do, I’m usually wrong. š
WHY DIDN’T THEY RUN OUT OF THE HOUSE?? (Nevermind, the sims never run away from fire, they stay to look at it & freak out.)
How did you ever come up with this story? It’s so fabulous & I’m always on the edge of my seat waiting for the next post!
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I like hearing people’s theories because they give me new insights and ideas. š
And yeah, sims are pretty stupid. Actually, except for the scene at the beginning and the bit with Bella reflecting the fire from behind the tree, these pics were all taken back when I was filming Legend. I didn’t do anything except sell the fire alarm and tell Seth to start a fire in the fireplace. Everything else was totally free will, including Bella and Mortimer and Michael coming to check out the fire and Emma’s look.
But I’ve had time since then to think of plot and character reasons for that look.
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It wouldn’t be fun if they ran away!
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What a great ending to the chapter! My eyes about popped from their spaces when I saw Emma’s face! And I love how you really threw Lilith into the moment with the flames!
WOW!
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Thank you! š And that shot of Emma was entirely free will. I don’t think the chaos mod painting was out yet when I was taking those pictures.
I did use the chaos mod painting for the pic of Lilith. But I like it quite a bit. š
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This is one of the most engaging Sims stories I’ve read. Thanks for your hard work and effort in putting it up. š
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Aww, thanks. š Although I wouldn’t call it hard work and effort. More like the most fun I’ve ever had and a very enjoyable addiction.
Thanks for taking the time to check it out and read it and comment. I do really appreciate that.
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Oh wow…I know I keep saying it but this is seriously creepy…and I love it! You have such a way of drawing the reader in with your writing and the shots are just amazing.
Bravo!
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Thank you. š I’ll reply to your email soon – I am feeling sort of drained socially at the moment and need a bit of hermit-y time to recharge. Silly introversion.
I realized the other day that all the Poe I read as a kid may have influenced me just a tiny bit. š
I always appreciate your comments. Thank you for reading and taking the time to reply.
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No worries! š
I read a lot of Poe myself. Loved his work, so dark, so chilling.
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I am always amazed at well you write, but this time I am simply stunned. You can keep people on the edges of their seats, begging for more.
I truly believe that engaging is not the proper word; I mean, honestly.
Thank you for all the time this has taken to put together. Please, don’t stop! I really enjoy you and your incredible writing.
Thanks,
Katelin
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Wow, that really means a lot. I wrote the first 8 pics last night, but I hurriedly dashed off the rest today while I was home for lunch so I wasn’t sure if it was really the best I could do.
I don’t plan on stopping until I’m finished, and then I’m going to keep writing it as a text story. Hmm – if I share the text only version online somewhere I could put a link to it here, or maybe keep updating this with bits of the full text version.
It’s my favorite way to spend my time. š
And thank you very much for the compliment on my writing. Writing is pretty much who I am, so that’s certainly a compliment that goes to the marrow.
I hope you keep enjoying my little story and I am so very glad that you’re reading it and commenting. You are awesome.
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Yeah, you really are an amazing writer!
BTW, If you make a text version then you’re going to have to change up the text a little because some of the text soley relies on the picture or else it might not be understood by the readers.
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Yes, I know. The full text version may end up looking nothing like this, since a lot of the plot is based on things in the game.
Have a draft saved with 12 pictures, 11 of them captioned. Going to hopefully finish and publish the next update tonight. š
And again, thanks.
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Okay, I have a lot of good writing, but this story takes the loot! I mean its really good if you don’t understand me. š
But back to my rant!
This story is amazing! I love the drama, the cliffhangers, the charcacters, the horror! Its like a bunch of elements of a piece of artwork being put together the right way into something beautiful. You’ve got me hooked on this story and I love how long it takes for each update to come because the longer it takes the better you made it. Don’t stop or quit whatever your doing on this story because its wonderful. -wipes eyes- Just great. -gives two thumbs up-
Really marvelous.
And this was my first comment.
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Thank you for commenting! š And wow, what a comment.
I hope it’s epic lewtz, lol. (WoW joke, sigh.)
I do think of it very much as art, so that certainly means a lot. And I thought that I was a bit of an update machine, considering it’s a plotty story with scenes that I have to set up and film. š And I’m not stopping until it’s finished.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, and I really really appreciate your wonderful comment. It’s certainly motivation to keep going. š
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Great chapter Stacy! I’m super intrigued about that face Emma made. Gosh I’m liking Bella more and more. She’s cute and adorable and awesome. š
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Yeah, Bella is pretty awesome.
Emma’s face was entirely and completely free will – that whole scene was. š It happened back when I was shooting Legend. I set the fire and then noticed Bella and Mortimer and Michael had come to watch the fire. It was bizarre.
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There is something distinctly unsettling about the look on Emma’s face in that last picture. In part of it I can see traces of Nellie Olsen from “Little House on the Prairie” when she used to look down her nose at Laura Ingalls. It’s got touches of disdain; she’s looking at someone that she feels is clearly inferior to her.
There’s part of me feeling that if she were to speak at that moment, she would be saying something like:
“You. It’s all your fault. If I had been here earlier instead of with you, I could have stopped this. I hate you; I wish you were dead.”
There is a certain malevolence there. Also, I have never seen a Sim not panic in a fire unless they were putting it out. I’ve never seen one calmly turning their back to it. Even Seth, who we all know isn’t firing on all cylinders looks to be panicking. But Emma doesn’t look rattled in the least…spooky!
(applause) Absolutely wonderful! You’ve got me on the edge of my seat again. š
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My, aren’t you just the perceptive one? š *won’t say anything else spoiler-y*
She did that on her own. It was a few weeks back, but IIRC I found it more hilarious than creepy. But then I also didn’t see anything weird about the ice cream metaphor in Legend, so who knows?
And yes, Seth is freaking out in the background. Again, very perceptive.
Thank you. š
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I can never wait for the next chapter after each post
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This is amazing! You are so talented I really can’t wait for the next chapter! This has got to be my favourite story so far. I really love the captions on the pictures too š
Great work
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Aww, thanks. š I’m all happy that you like it.
Hopefully the next update won’t take too long, although it looks like it’s going to be a busy weekend so I might not get a whole lot of time to work on it.
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Brava!
Insert any and all of my previous comments. Feel better. Recharge. You know all of us will be waiting for the next bit š
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OMG look at Emma’s face. Shes either bored or unhappy. Seth is freaking out but wheres Sarah? I dont see her. Also I knew Seth was Emmas father rite when I heard about her. Poor Emma. Oh and how did u get the pic of Lilith close to the fire? That pic was awesome.
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Sarah is around, just not in that pic.
For the pic of Lilith – she was already just standing around on the porch in that particular save file. I used the chaos mod painting to set the lot on fire and she was just like “Whatever.” and kept standing there. So I used an animation from the chaos mod painting to get her expression – can’t remember exactly which animation it was at the moment.
I do like that pic. š
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i love that pic
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Oh my!!! Great, creepy post! Was it Emma who caused the fire? O_O
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Hmmm….maybe Emma is trying to kill Seth because she thinks he will kill her mother? Or because he just killed her mother? Poor Bella–that has to be a traumatic event.
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Oh yes, it was pretty traumatic for Bella. But she’s quite emotionally healthy, so that’s good.
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I jst found your blog and I’m amazed. Of all Sims 3 blogs that I’ve read, yours is more of a story-like and I love the cliffhangers and all. Keep up the good work š
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Thank you! It makes me very very happy to hear that you like the cliffhangers, lol. I do hope that I can keep up the good work.
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I’ve been writing a story called a Klepto’s Legacy I’d really like to see what you think (and anyone reading as well)
http://kleptoverse.wordpress.com/
I’ve been writing another story but this one has me really excited because its actually turning out better than I thought it would.
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Sure, I’ll check it out soon. š
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You know what I hate about your updates? ):<…
I always have to wait for the next update D:
And even worse, you always leave it on a cliffhanger. x_x
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I am completely hooked on this story! Can’t wait for the next update. š
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wow!! I CANT WAIT until the next post! Im biting my nails lol this is REALLY interesting! You have really awesome talent!! š
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Awww, thank you. š I do plan to work on the next update for most of the day tomorrow, so hopefully it won’t be too long.
And now I am off to bed. Thank you, everyone. I love you all.
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It can’t be too long, you’re posts are so awesome that they’re always too SHORT, ’cause I’d just like to read more and more… XD
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Awww, thanks. š Hopefully I can have the next update out within a couple of days – I took a much needed break yesterday, but it was nice and refreshing and now I’m eager to get back into the story.
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your welcome š
cant wait till you get it posted! I’m going to keep checking back lol
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Eek! Emma looks crazy! She looked like she was the one who started the fire! :S Creepy…
I’ve grown to like Bella a lot, by the way. š I’m hoping that she’ll stay for a big part of the story.
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AAAAh! What a note to end on! I really love how this is developing, keep up the amazing work.
How does Lilith manage to look amazing in every picture? It’s quite cute how she always seems to be flattering her eyelashes.
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I’ve been looking forward to this blog all week while I was at camp, and you did not disappoint! Great updates. š
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WOw! Great job! š
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Thanks! š And yeah, this one was a bit more action-y so less of Bella’s penchant for pretty metaphors, which may have been what slightly bored you before? š
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Wonderful update! I just knew that there’s more to Emma that meets the eye. I’m beginning to think that she may be the cause behind her father’s weirdness. Is she an evil influence on those in her house? Perhaps a conduit for evil spirits, hobgobblins and the like?
I can’t wait for the next chapter because this has me on the edge of my seat. What else did Bella see?!
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Those are interesting thoughts on Emma. Hmm.
Thank you for being you and for being awesome. I hope you’re doing all right. š
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What a great update! I always have shivers crawling up my spine when I finish reading, I think they are as eager for the next update as I am!
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I did wonder what Mortimer was doing there. I’m loving Bella’s story so far. So looking forward to the next chapter!
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Yeah – I did stick in that picture from Legend. š Getting started on the next chapter later today.
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so i’m curious…this was suppose to be a legacy prologue…if it still is i don’t know but either way I’m wondering how this was/is suppose to lead into a legacy?
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It’s not a legacy now. But this was supposed to be the story of how Lilith ended up alone and broke and homeless like a proper legacy founder.
I think I’ve pretty much decided on a different ending now though.
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Your story get even more intresting with every chapter! I love it! But why is Emma not happy to see Bella?
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The light of the fire is the shadow of death.
That is a terribly powerful line. I *love* that.
I love this legacy. Some of the best writing I’ve read in a long, long time.
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Thank you. Truly. That means an incredible lot. Writing is pretty much all I’ve ever wanted to do since at least kindergarten, so…
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Wow, again unspeakable, especially expression on Emma’s face. And the picture with Lilith standing next to the fire is fantastic.
I also like how you add bits about yourself and your cats on the comments on the pictures. In that way we can get to know you a little better. I hope Luna is doing great now.
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Thanks. š
Unfortunately the mouseover text gets less interesting as you go on and I become more and more obsessed with the story itself. And actually I haven’t posted any pics of Luna on LJ lately either. I should do that.
She’s growing and is completely integrated with the other cats now. š They all give her baths and hang out with her and it’s all good.
The Lilith pic was all the chaos mod painting, but the Emma one was entirely autonomous free will. I don’t think I had the chaos mod painting yet when I took it, actually – most of the pics of the fire were taken when I was shooting Legend. I sold the fire alarm and had Seth start a fire in the fireplace and just took pics of what happened from there – Bella and Mortimer and Michael all came to watch completely on their own.
Thank you, as always. š
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It’s like Emma is staring into your soul… with button eyes.
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And my new kitty was strongly disliked by my other cats for a long time before he started to fit in.
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“Imagine it. You can imagine it. The fire. Burning, burning. The fire comes for us all. The light of the fire is the shadow of death. ”
I love the colouring on that picture.
And I agree with some of the comments. Emma really does not look happy to see Bella.
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oh God Emma is staring at me and it is freaking the crap outta me lolz its like she wants to get me or something stalker! lolz No Emma isn’t a stalker but she is creeping me out. Thanks for putting them up for download. Im making a story with them in it kind of like your not as much horror though.
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Ouch, why does little miss Emma look so angry? lol. It’s almost as if she’s blaming Bella for the fire. Unless Emma’s father found out about her having a friend so he went crazy and started the fire? Or maybe he blamed it on Bella somehow?
But yet… Why is Seth the one freaking out in the background and not Emma?
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Those pictures were all complete free will. I just started the fire and then started shooting pics. The only reason Bella is even in the story is because she and Mortimer and Michael came to watch the fire. On total free will – I wasn’t controlling them and wasn’t planning on using them.
So yeah. Seth freaked out because that’s what he did on free will. Same with Emma’s face. We can come up with story reasons for it, though. I think that once Seth set the fire, he sort of…completely lost his mind for a while. Like he’s freaking out here, and once the fire stopped he went completely catatonic. He can’t actually deal with having killed Sarah. He’s buried the guilt incredibly far down inside himself, but it’s there.
As for Emma’s face – I don’t really remember but she may have actually seen the three of them, or at least looked in that general direction. Really though, this being Bella’s memories, I think over the years she’s projected the guilt that she feels and she imagines Emma accusing her.
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Hahaha Sims can do that sometimes. They take it upon themselves to do impromptu changes to the story. My Sims have often done that to me but I quite like the changes so far.
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Wow! Emma looks miffed… beyond miffed… almost angry to see Bella and the others. I wasn’t expecting that. The brother-sister and friend conversation felt very real. I have a feeling people are going to die. I was wondering when we’d see the “fire.” The flames comments have been foreshadowing this for some time now. The part about Lilith seeing the flames was freaky. Great chapter!
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That was all entirely autonomous. š I just took the pics.
Awww, thanks! Glad it felt real. And yep, people who are around Seth tend to die.
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